Needs some work

In my opinion, your first release of something to the public, no matter what it is, shouldn't be a "tryout". If you want feedback from experienced users, you should publish it at the forums first, or you could just try to finish it up by yourself and then publish it as a completed proyect.

Appart from that, taking in count the simplicity of the animation, it's not very bad for being your first. The animation is smooth at first, but then it becomes abrupt when the girl turns. Althought you could better it, you should start a new proyect, like a movie or something, as I could supose that you had worked with other animation programs before and you know the basics of animation.

P.S. To be just an animation tryout the drawing is cool

I wish you luck and I hope that you succeed
Your crazy (but no that much) mexican reviewer, Nava (or Crazy Nava)

''It's not what we are... It's what we can do''

Just wonderful, this animation makes me feel proud of us, and why I say "us"? Because we are all humans, everyone makes mistakes, that's why there are wars, it's in our nature, but we must understand that we are all brothers and that, when together, we can see further, we can go faster, we can go higher...

...appart from that, very well made, has a great meaning and great music by the way. Also, the alien thing was interesting.

P.S. The awesome face was... awesome.